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Tuesday, October 14, 2008

BR2-02 STARMAN

Bill is a farmer. One day, he drive a big red car. He is very tired and hot. So he want to go home. Suddenly, he see a man on the road. He goes to near the man and stops. Bill says "Hello", "Are you OK?". But the man doesn't say anything and doesn't move. The man looks at the sky. Bill think that he helps the man. And then the man gets into Bill's car. The car drives fast on the straight road. During driving the car, the man doesn't say anything and he sleep.

Bill and the man arrive at Bill's house. But the man doesn't wake up. Bill leaves the man asleep in the car. He talks to Emily who is Bill's wife everything. Emily suggest to Bill that look in the man's pockets. They find a wallet in the man's pockets. And they know his name, John Philips and his telephone number. First, they call a doctor. After they call a doctor, they call telephone number. They are surprized!! The man's wife says "John Philips is missing for thirty years ". They don't believe it because John Philips is in front of them. A doctor arrive at Bill's home. A doctor sees John Philips and talks to many times. But John doesn't talk anything. A doctor diside that take John to hospital. And a doctor and John get on the plane. Suddenly, John talks. And he stands up in the plane. Then, He jumps to out of the plane. John is falling down. A beam of light stops him and takes him away up. Then John isn't in the sky. There is nothing. A doctor says "I want to go too". He goes to future. He is like John!!

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1 comment:

Paul Beaufait said...

Yuhei,

Would you please review Mr. T's Book Review Recipe for advice regarding the content and organization of book reviews? Rather than retelling the stories you read, your writing should reflect your choices of books, your thinking about the books you choose (before and after reading them), whether you recommend them to your classmates and peers, and why. You also need word counts on every post.

Cheers.